Informative Essay EDITFEST

1. Read 6 or more of your classmates' robot advertisements.

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2. Write as Many Thoughtful Revision Suggestions as you can.  
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Examples:

• Capitalize “_______” 
• I think this would read better if you...
• I don’t understand your line, “___________.” 
•  Check Spelling: “___________”
• There needs to be a ___ after ________.

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Finished?

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